The Bunker
Oct. 16th, 2014 04:20 pmFor my
spnspiration bingo squares: - Slam poetry and inanimate object POV
I've NEVER done anything like this before!! Well, I've written pomes, of course, but I've never read them and I'd certainly be too effing nervous to stand up and recite in front of people so I wasn't sure what this would come out like.
So without further ado
Here it is - the poem recording which makes this a slam. I think!
Voice Recorder >>
And it you want to read it too
The Bunker
There’s a rhythm in my life, a pulse that beats even though I have no heart, no veins, no blood.
I was alone for a long time, I counted the beats
I counted the stars above me
I counted time passing through my many doors.
I have doors between worlds, I hold worlds inside and outside of me
Keeping worlds in, keeping worlds out.
I hold fast, I hold them shut
I keep this world safe.
I open them when needed, let air in, let air out
I breathe, sometimes.
spnspiration bingo squares: - Slam poetry and inanimate object POVI've NEVER done anything like this before!! Well, I've written pomes, of course, but I've never read them and I'd certainly be too effing nervous to stand up and recite in front of people so I wasn't sure what this would come out like.
So without further ado
Here it is - the poem recording which makes this a slam. I think!
Voice Recorder >>
And it you want to read it too
The Bunker
There’s a rhythm in my life, a pulse that beats even though I have no heart, no veins, no blood.
I was alone for a long time, I counted the beats
I counted the stars above me
I counted time passing through my many doors.
I have doors between worlds, I hold worlds inside and outside of me
Keeping worlds in, keeping worlds out.
I hold fast, I hold them shut
I keep this world safe.
I open them when needed, let air in, let air out
I breathe, sometimes.
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Date: 2014-10-16 03:31 pm (UTC)READ TO ME AMBER
READ ME ALL THE THINGS!
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Date: 2014-10-16 03:58 pm (UTC)I'm not a great reader, I stutter and stumble too much!
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Date: 2014-10-16 04:28 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked the poem... I think those two items might be the easiest squares on my card! I'm going to have to look some of the items up to make sure I know what they are!
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Date: 2014-10-16 04:55 pm (UTC)I enjoyed hearing you read that so much!!! <3
A lovely idea writing a poem from the pov of the Bunker.
Who knows, it is clearly imbued with mystical power, perhaps it is really thinking. It may have long conversations with the Impala when she is in the garage. :D
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Date: 2014-10-16 05:03 pm (UTC)I had to write from an inanimate object's pov for a creative writing class. It's a challenge, but you rocked it!
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Date: 2014-10-16 05:16 pm (UTC)also I agree with everyone here, your voice is amazing, why aren't you doing podfic?
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Date: 2014-10-16 05:34 pm (UTC)Um podficcing. I'm not actually that good at talking. This was short enough not to get too tangled up over...
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