The Bunker

Oct. 16th, 2014 04:20 pm
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For my spnspiration bingo squares: - Slam poetry and inanimate object POV
I've NEVER done anything like this before!! Well, I've written pomes, of course, but I've never read them and I'd certainly be too effing nervous to stand up and recite in front of people so I wasn't sure what this would come out like.
So without further ado
Here it is - the poem recording which makes this a slam. I think!

Voice Recorder >>

And it you want to read it too

The Bunker
There’s a rhythm in my life, a pulse that beats even though I have no heart, no veins, no blood.
I was alone for a long time, I counted the beats
I counted the stars above me
I counted time passing through my many doors.

I have doors between worlds, I hold worlds inside and outside of me
Keeping worlds in, keeping worlds out.
I hold fast, I hold them shut
I keep this world safe.
I open them when needed, let air in, let air out
I breathe, sometimes.
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Date: 2014-10-16 03:26 pm (UTC)

Date: 2014-10-16 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
Not too weird, then?

Date: 2014-10-16 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yohkobennington.livejournal.com
NOPE.

READ TO ME AMBER

READ ME ALL THE THINGS!

Date: 2014-10-16 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
Ha ha I'm not very good at reading out loud, I usually get my tongue all twisted (one reason to keep this one very short! LOL)

Date: 2014-10-16 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yohkobennington.livejournal.com
BUt your accent is so prettyyyyy.

Date: 2014-10-16 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chomaisky.livejournal.com
READ MORE!!!

Date: 2014-10-16 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
Oh not you too! LOL
I'm not a great reader, I stutter and stumble too much!

Date: 2014-10-16 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
Well thanks you. :D

Date: 2014-10-16 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chomaisky.livejournal.com
I don't care! You have a calming voice. Why don't you start reading your weekly episode related drabbles? :D

Date: 2014-10-16 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com
I'm impressed! I couldn't get the audio to work (iphone) but the written poem is gorgeous. I'm kind of afraid of my card.

Date: 2014-10-16 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
Ah well, I needn't be embarrassed about my voice then! LOL
I'm glad you liked the poem... I think those two items might be the easiest squares on my card! I'm going to have to look some of the items up to make sure I know what they are!

Date: 2014-10-16 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
ha ha I suppose I could do that, if I remember.

Date: 2014-10-16 04:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] fannishliss.livejournal.com
that was LOVELY!!!

I enjoyed hearing you read that so much!!! <3

A lovely idea writing a poem from the pov of the Bunker.

Who knows, it is clearly imbued with mystical power, perhaps it is really thinking. It may have long conversations with the Impala when she is in the garage. :D

Date: 2014-10-16 04:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] fannishliss.livejournal.com
everything she said. you sound fantastic. clear, poised, not stumbley at all. :)

Date: 2014-10-16 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siennavie.livejournal.com
*\o/* So lovely to hear it read aloud! And your voice is beautiful!

Date: 2014-10-16 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tifaching.livejournal.com
I can't do the voice recorder on my phone, but damn, just reading it I can hear the beat in my head. I can't wait to get home to my laptop and get the full effect. You are on fire lately, girl. On fire.

I had to write from an inanimate object's pov for a creative writing class. It's a challenge, but you rocked it!

Date: 2014-10-16 05:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] meesasometimes.livejournal.com
OMG!!!! Well, it's cool enough on it's own, BUT>>>> I accidentally double clicked, opened up two windows and they read in like a round one phrase off from each other, it was the COOLEST THING EVER~~~

also I agree with everyone here, your voice is amazing, why aren't you doing podfic?

Date: 2014-10-16 05:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] meesasometimes.livejournal.com
I just did it again, you have to do it! It's blowing my mind with how cool it is. I just click to start and then click the vocaroo and it opens up it's own window and starts there too. The end is SO BEAUTIFUL with both voices and then one finishing and then the next so quiet. FUCKING AMAZEBALLS

Date: 2014-10-16 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
Ooh if I was clever I'd edit it to do that...

Um podficcing. I'm not actually that good at talking. This was short enough not to get too tangled up over...

Date: 2014-10-16 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quickreaver.livejournal.com
SO COOOOL. You have a great voice for reading, too. Well, for listening, for me. ;)

Date: 2014-10-16 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
And there's an idea for another ficlet! You should write that... :D

Date: 2014-10-16 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
Aw thank you!

Date: 2014-10-16 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
meesasometimes recommends listening to is in two windows at once slightly staggered! LOL

Date: 2014-10-16 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
Ah you Americans and your love of British accents... :D

Date: 2014-10-16 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quickreaver.livejournal.com
We're so easy, ain't we? ;)
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