amberdreams | Danneel & JJ drawing

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amberdreams at Danneel & JJ drawing - help!

I am not sure why I keep trying portraits.... I was vaguely thinking I might give this to Jensen BUT I am not sure about it. Is it a good enough likeness? I can see how I can do a little more with Danneel's hair, but is there anything I can do to improve both faces and get them more correct?

I've done my usual and made Danneel's face too long and thin, and I'm not exactly sure what I've done wrong with JJ - so any help would be appreciated, including draw-overs. Bear in mind the paper is fairly rough and rubbing out knackers the surface.

I can also see Danneel's mouth is not right...
I'm thinking of adding JJ's hand coming out towards the viewer (which might serve a dual purpose as it might help distract from the inaccurate faces LOL!)
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