Beta request

[amberdreams]

Hello all you lovelies - is there anyone out there with time to beta read a short fic for me?  It's c 1600 words of Sam, Dean and Alastair, and involves a character self harming (cutting) - in case that might put you off.
I'm looking for someone to see if it makes sense/stands alone, if the order it's currently in works or not, if there is something missing or any way it could be improved....
Also if anyone has done a kamakaze remix before, a second opinion on whether this story counts as a remix would be a bonus!

Comments

[reapertownusa.livejournal.com]

I know nothing about remixing - not sure I'm doing mine right either - but I'm having fun ;)

BUT I can beta (I mostly just do grammar beta but can still tell you whether or not it makes sense) and I'm sure you know I'm not put off by...anything. And admittedly like the theme of self-harm...and Alastair.

[amber1960.livejournal.com]

Oh that would be grand! I'll email you forthwith...

[nwspaprtaxis.livejournal.com]

I can look it over if you need a second pair of eyes. I did a couple of remixes - one for roque_clasique the other for mad_server and can tell you that it really is very fluid and interpretive so I wouldn't worry too hard about it.

:)

Sorry I never got back to you! This week has been insane for me. Do you need me to discuss it with you? /o\

[amber1960.livejournal.com]

How about I send you what I've done then you can give me your thoughts? If you have time...I know you've been busy!

[nwspaprtaxis.livejournal.com]

That would be perfect!

:D

Thank you for understanding.

[http://users.livejournal.com/tesserae_/]

You look well-squared-away here, but do feel free to ask on the next one...

[amber1960.livejournal.com]

Oh thanks, I will!