Danneel & JJ drawing - 2nd attempt

[amberdreams]

Thank you everyone for your advice yesterday! The general consensus was both mouths were not wide enough, Danneel's chin too long/square, teeth wrong, more shading required.

So I tried to widen both mouths a little, make Danneel's teeth bigger etc - and now I've cocked up her mouth totally LOL. She looks like she's got buck teeth. I think I'll probably just scrap this and maybe try again later on nicer paper that is more forgiving to a putty rubber.

Had one last try to fix the buck teeth, not sure it worked...but I'm definitely stopping here.