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I apologise in advance for this one being so miserable. I wanted to write a sexy car-washing fic but this happened instead.

Car Wash
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E/O Drabble Challenge: word count 100
Challenge word: paint
Warnings: Angst
Summary: The Impala is clean, inside and out. Can the same be said for Dean?

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:: paint my body red - with blood, with rage
paint my heart black with the taint of sin
then scrub me clean again
if you can ::

Sam finds Dean outside, bare arms covered in grease and a ready smile on his face. The gleam in his eyes is brighter than the Impala’s new-burnished paintwork.
Who’d have thought black could dazzle the senses so?

Sam’s eyes avoid the rawness of Dean’s scarred forearm, as if by not seeing the Mark he can forget about the different, empty dark that had filled Dean’s eyes before.
Caring without sharing – it’s the Winchester way.

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Date: 2014-11-16 10:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] frozen_delight
How did you manage to get something so angsty out of the episode? I'm impressed. :)

Lovely drabble, particularly this bit: Sam’s eyes avoid the rawness of Dean’s scarred forearm.

Date: 2014-11-16 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] galwithglasses.livejournal.com
Perfect last line. The whole thing is awesome writing.

Date: 2014-11-16 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jj1564.livejournal.com
"Caring without sharing – it’s the Winchester way"

This is just perfect especially that last line.

Date: 2014-11-16 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tifaching.livejournal.com
This scene just begged to be angstified. :)

Who'd have thought that black could dazzle the senses so indeed. Both Dean and his baby are extra dazzling when their dark is burnished to its maximum shine.

Date: 2014-11-16 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dolnmoon.livejournal.com
that made me swallow hard. sigh..

Date: 2014-11-17 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chomaisky.livejournal.com
I came here to get my weekly dose of hurt!Dean and got it :)

Date: 2014-11-17 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Oh my lord, that is so *GOOD*.

Date: 2014-11-17 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zara-zee.livejournal.com
Beautiful.You say so much with so little...
From: [identity profile] livejournal.livejournal.com
User [livejournal.com profile] frozen_delight referenced to your post from Recs for 10x06 "Ask Jeeves" and Fic: Homosexual Murderers (http://frozen-delight.livejournal.com/26315.html) saying: [...] succeeded at finding something angsty in the Impala/single-layered-brothers opening scene: Car Wash [...]

Date: 2014-11-20 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness. This is lovely.

Date: 2014-11-21 08:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-eilthana.livejournal.com
Caring without sharing – it’s the Winchester way.

Oh yes. Absolutely.
I really liked the drabble. :)

Date: 2014-11-22 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fiery-fox2.livejournal.com
Oh my dear. What magnificence. Utterly perfect.

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