Beta request

[amberdreams]

Hello all you lovelies - is there anyone out there with time to beta read a short fic for me?  It's c 1600 words of Sam, Dean and Alastair, and involves a character self harming (cutting) - in case that might put you off.
I'm looking for someone to see if it makes sense/stands alone, if the order it's currently in works or not, if there is something missing or any way it could be improved....
Also if anyone has done a kamakaze remix before, a second opinion on whether this story counts as a remix would be a bonus!

Comments

[http://users.livejournal.com/tesserae_/]

You look well-squared-away here, but do feel free to ask on the next one...

[amber1960.livejournal.com]

Oh thanks, I will!