http://jj1564.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jj1564.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amberdreams 2014-10-29 11:40 am (UTC)

This was an amazing story, I loved getting the different perspectives. You nailed each 'voice' too especially Kevin and his increasing panic/fear. I couldn't believe he shot Sam with the crossbow! Dean's injuries and his hallucinations were very realistic and it was great that Kevin managed to convince him that he wasn't in hell. Great story, loved it.

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