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amberdreams ([personal profile] amberdreams) wrote2013-09-24 10:28 pm

Origin - a drabble

Apropos of nothing, a drabble. 100 words about SPN.

Origin


It starts with Mary burning on a ceiling.

Except it doesn’t.

It really starts with hurt and rage, the jealousy of a favoured son convinced he’s being scorned. It begins with a fall from grace, and innocents suffer, the way innocence always does in a war.

Because somewhere along the way, that’s what it became.  A war.  A battle for supremacy between Heaven and Hell, with humanity caught in between.

The thing is, perhaps it doesn’t really matter where or why it began.  What really matters is where it will end.

And who will end it.

Sam and Dean Winchester.

[identity profile] jennytork.livejournal.com 2013-09-24 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
That was fantastic! Well thought out!

[identity profile] amber1960.livejournal.com 2013-09-24 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Sometimes pizza can be inspirational...I had the idea over lunch *grin*

[identity profile] ash48.livejournal.com 2013-09-24 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome!

[identity profile] lylithj2.livejournal.com 2013-09-24 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
That was beautiful and powerful!

[identity profile] dolnmoon.livejournal.com 2013-09-24 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Good job. I love the directness of a drabble.

[identity profile] tifaching.livejournal.com 2013-09-25 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
It really starts with hurt and rage, the jealousy of a favoured son convinced he’s being scorned. It begins with a fall from grace, and innocents suffer, the way innocence always does in a war. So much truth, gorgeously written.

And who will end it.

Sam and Dean Winchester
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Damn right!

[identity profile] blackrabbit42.livejournal.com 2013-09-25 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
Damn straight!

:)

[identity profile] amber1960.livejournal.com 2013-09-25 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
Why thank you... And I'm now having hysterics about your icon!

[identity profile] amber1960.livejournal.com 2013-09-25 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks very much!

[identity profile] amber1960.livejournal.com 2013-09-25 08:55 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks - and me too. You almost HAVE to be direct when you are being economical with your words...

[identity profile] amber1960.livejournal.com 2013-09-25 08:56 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks babe - it's one version of the truth, anyway!

[identity profile] amber1960.livejournal.com 2013-09-25 08:56 am (UTC)(link)
heh heh - fist bump!

[identity profile] dolnmoon.livejournal.com 2013-09-25 03:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah its hard to mask your point in a drabble but that is one of the things I love most about them. 100 words of complete direct point.