Help! Beta brain needed...Update - sorted!

[amberdreams]

I've nearly finished my SammyBB - it's a minibang; it's about 6400 words at the moment. Apart from a thorough beta'ing, I really need some advice about the ending. At the moment I am not sure it really has one...but what is there might be ok, I just can't tell any more.

If anyone could give it a read and just let me know what you think about the end-problem, that would do me for now. If you have time to beta it as well, that's a bonus!

The summary goes like this: Set at an unspecified time during Season 10. After an argument Sam stalks off and eventually Dean goes searching for him. Unable to find Sam, Dean returns to their motel room to find Sam is trapped inside an invisible cage in the middle of their room. Dean can see into the cage, but Sam can’t see out. Between them they have to find a way to free Sam from this prison.

Presently there is no wincest, though it could be implied.

Comments

[caranfindel.livejournal.com]

I'd be happy to help!

[amberdreams.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I've sent you a PM

[vyperdd.livejournal.com]

Me too, if you want a second set of eyes.

[amberdreams.livejournal.com]

Fab! Two brains are better than one, right? I'll send you a PM

[etrix.livejournal.com]

I can also give it a read.

[amberdreams.livejournal.com]

Thanks a lot - I've got two volunteers who popped up before you so I won't trouble you now, though maybe if you are available I could pass it to you for a final check once I've done any changes carafindel and vyperdd come up with?

[etrix.livejournal.com]

Sure. Just let me know when and what you need.

[milly-gal.livejournal.com]

I don't have the spare time but I hope you find a read through/beta hun :)

[amberdreams.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I've got 3 volunteers!

[milly-gal.livejournal.com]

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